Friday, January 30, 2015

Wonderful Wonder Literary Essay!


A Literary Essay

Based on the Book

Wonder by R.J. Palacio

 

In the book Wonder, Auggie has to overcome challenges because of his facial deformity. August is being bullied because of his face. The gist of the story I think is Don't judge a boy by his face. I think that is important because you should not be mean to someone because they have a facial deformity. You should instead judge them by their character. I wonder why the kids made fun of him. He never provoked them or anything. I think that they were just trying to be mean.

Throughout the story, August was bullied because of his facial deformity. Some people at his camp especially made fun of humble cause of his face. For example, on page 266 at the top, Eddie said, “What happened to your face?" At the bottom of the page, he also said, “Are you talking to me, Freddie Kruger? I don't think you want to mess with me, you ugly freak." This shows that August was made fun of because some people couldn't control themselves and acted very rude. The cause was because they were making fun of his face. Auggie didn't resort to violence, he didn't even make Eddie pay a fine!

Also in the story, most of the boys in 5th grade that were friends with Julian turned on him because of Julian. For example, on page 170, Charlotte explained why not many people were talking to him. The author writes,"...Anyway, so basically what happened at the party was that Julian went around telling everyone that you punched him because you had emotional problems..." This shows that Julian basically caused the boys to turn on them. Julian is the main problem of this part of the story. I wonder why Julian doesn’t like Auggie. He is always mean and rude to him and Jack. Maybe it was because on page 154, Jack punched Julian in the mouth. The author writes, “We could have been partners. You don’t have to be friends with that freak if you don’t want to be, you know....” After Julian said that, Jack punched him in the mouth. Julian was the problem of that situation too.  




By the end of the story, the school was treating August like a normal person! They were not mean to him at all, they were actually nice! Except for Julian. For example, on page 305 at the middle, people told August,"way to go, Auggie!" They also chanted,"Aug-gie! Aug-gie! Aug-gie!" This shows that the school was being nice to Aug-gie. Most of them were but now everyone is nice to Auggie!

 

This essay shows that August has to overcome challenges to reach happiness. This theme relates to the world because a lot of people have to overcome challenges to reach happiness. 


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Thursday, January 29, 2015

Tremendous Thursday AHW! SEUSICAL!!!!!!

Today, we preformed the seusical again! I think that it was easier today than yesterday because now I have experience. Before the seusical, I had never done a play. Ever! So, now I have experience. Tomorrow, my mom, my grandpas, my grandmas and my aunt and my bros are coming to watch me perform! I can't wait!

Wednesday, January 28, 2015

SEUSICAL MUSICAL!

TODAY,
I preformed the musical! 2 more to go! I am so happy and it was so fun and I didn't mess up! I was so happy to preform and it was so fun. I hope to do it next year...and the next year! I loved it!!! I think 5th if possible and soon-to-be 6th graders should do the play.
Bloggers that wrote about the seusical musical:
Vivian: http://vivianyee32867.blogspot.com/2015/01/ahw_28.html?m=1
Ellie: http://elliedblog30425.blogspot.com/2015/01/seussical-play.html?spref=tw&m=1
Shin Be: http://29969.blogspot.com/2015/01/ahw_28.html?m=1
I don't have time to do them all...

Wonderful Wonder Literary Essay!

In the book Wonder, Auggie has to overcome challenges because of his facial deformity. August is being bullied because of his face. The gist of the story I think is Don't judge a boy by his face. I think that is important because you should not be mean to someone because they have a facial deformity. You should instead judge them by their character.

Throughout the story, August was bullied because of his facial deformity. Some people at his camp especially made fun of humble cause of his face. For example, on page 266 at the top, Eddie said,"What happened to your face?" At the bottom of the page, he also said,"Are you talking to me, Freddie Kruger? I don't think you want to mess with me, you ugly freak." This shows that August was made fun of because some people couldn't control themselves and acted very rude. The cause was because they were making fun of his face. Auggie didn't resort to violence, he didn't even make Eddie pay a fine!

Also in the story, most of the boys in 5th grade that were friends with Julian turned on him because of Julian. For example, on page 170, Charlotte explained why not many people were talking to him. The author writes,"...Anyway, so basically what happened at the party was that Julian went around telling everyone that you punched him because you had emotional problems..." This shows that Julian basically
 caused the boys to turn on them. Julian is the main problem of this part of the story. 

By the end of the story, the school was treating August like a normal person! They were not mean to him at all, they were actually nice! Except for Julian. For example, on page 305 at the middle, people told August,"way to go, Auggie!" They also chanted,"Aug-gie! Aug-gie! Aug-gie!" This shows that the school was being nice to Aug-gie. Most of them were but now everyone is nice to Auggie!

This essay shows that August has to overcome challenges to reach happiness. This theme relates to the world because a lot of people have to overcome challenges to reach happiness. 



Tuesday, January 27, 2015

Tuesday AHW!!!

Payce is my little, little brother. He is 3 years old. He likes to smile and he is very musical. As I wright, he's drumming on our...refrigerator? Yes, he drums on our refrigerator. For Christmas, our grandparents got him a microphone set and a drum set. For his birthday, he got a piano and a drum toy! 

Monday, January 26, 2015

Monday AHW

Today, I had seusical jr practice. It was very fun because....
IT WAS A DRESS REHEARSAL!
I really like dress rehearsals because I like to dress up! I like my costumes too. Especially my circus act one. Today, I don't have so much homework so, that's good. 

Thursday, January 22, 2015

Thursday AHW!!!

Today, it's Thursday. So, that means that I have dance and seusical practice! I like them both but I am really tired and I have a sore throat. That is why I wasn't talking much. I don't like it at all because some people who didn't know I had a sore throat would try talking and talking...I mean, it's not like it's their fault but it really did hurt when I did have to talk.

Wednesday, January 21, 2015

AHW Wednesday

Today, I was sick and at home. Payce was already home by the time I woke up. I had to miss play practice today. It is obsessive but I still don't want to miss it! In the morning when I first woke up, my throat was hurting so much, I could barely speak! I wanted to go to school because I knew we had sciracy but no, I just had to be sick on a Wednesday. I wish I was sick on a Thursday. :(

Tuesday, January 20, 2015

ahw Tuesday!

Today, I had play practice...AGAIN.
I have play practice all week! The most play practice I have is on Friday, 5 hours and 55 minutes! That's practically 6 hours! I am really going to be happy to get off on Friday because I will have a day, no, weekend off!

Friday, January 16, 2015

literary essay

In the book Wonder, Auggie has to overcome challenges because of his facial deformity. August is being bullied because of his face. The gist of the story I think is Don't judge a boy by his face. I think that is important because you should not be mean to someone because they have a facial deformity. You should instead judge them by their character.

Throughout the story, August was bullied because of his facial deformity. Some people at his camp especially made fun of humble cause of his face. For example, on page 266 at the top, Eddie said,"What happened to your face?" At the bottom of the page, he also said,"Are you talking to me, Freddie Kruger? I don't think you want to mess with me, you ugly freak." This shows that August was made fun of because some people couldn't control themselves and acted very rude. The cause was because they were making fun of his face. Auggie didn't resort to violence, he didn't even make Eddie pay a fine! 

Also in the story, most of the boys in 5th grade that were friends with Julian turned on him because of Julian. For example, on page 170, Charlotte explained why not many people were talking to him. The author writes,"...

Not finished. Other stuff on Literary Essay Organizer.

Thursday, January 15, 2015

AHW Thursday

Today, I had play practice and it was fun and it was only until the end of choice hour!! Yay!!! I feel bad for Vivian because she had to stay until 6.
I had a good day and I had ballet! We learned part of our new dance and it was fun.
I am happy that I do ballet and next year, I am probably going to do LYRICAL! Lyrical looks very cool and I might do some more too!

Wednesday, January 14, 2015

Ahw Wednesday

Today, I had play practice...AGAIN.
I have it a lot and one of my best friends Sarah, has it for...well....basically the whole month of January. She is playing as JoJo the who. I hope a lot of people come to se us preform because: 1:I like the play, 2:it is fun to do so I want to do it, and 3:because I have a solo!!!!(speaking piece)

part of my literary essay

In the book Wonder, Auggie has to overcome challenges because of his facial deformity. August is being bullied because of his face. The gist of the story I think is Don't judge a boy by his face. I think that is important because you should not be mean to someone because they have a facial deformity.

Tuesday, January 13, 2015

Play practice

Today I had play practice and it was fun. We rehearsed here on who, the grinch song(not actually called that), and we also did the people vs who song(IDK actual song name...)
I had fun at practice and we also got bagels and our seusical shirts. 

Monday, January 12, 2015

AHW Monday

Today, I had a casual day...
EXCEPT
for the fact that from 5:17-7:00, I was at groves, selling ZINC jewelry and cheering on the BCS Cobras!!!
I didn't stay until the end but I hope we won. 

Friday, January 9, 2015

Chunking To Imitate!

My chunking stuff from social studies!!!

3b.IMITATION: Frying his body all day, / Jacob Johnson / got a horrible sunburn by afternoon / because the cheap suntan lotion from his brother / because a thin liquid / and dripped into the sand.

4b.IMITATION: All vegetables, / from celery to fresh tomatoes, / were laughing or dancing or playing / in the salad bowl / and the salad dressing / that had been as quiet and unnoticed as the bowl itself, / suddenly giggled with glee